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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

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Regular workouts make people healthy and active. There is a debate that children should participate in sports at
school
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, and it is essential for a student’s
life
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.
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, the opposing argument suggests that it should not be mandatory and who is interested in participating should have the freedom to perform in sports. It is surely a good initiative for all the students to participate in at least one sport. Undoubtedly, children are sent to
school
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 mainly for educational purposes. For a better
future
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 child should have excellent academic qualifications which aid in finding better jobs.
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, there are students who have born skills in sports and the ability to become a good sportsman in
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future
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the future
. These children should have the freedom of allocating more time on their practices to become better players.
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, doing workouts regularly will make the body healthy. Pupils who have exposure in sports have practical
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 experiences
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 as team
spirit and better
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spirit and a better
 communication. They will have better chances in the
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 job market as these skills will definitely be beneficial for any organisation.
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, the children who participate in sports seems to have the ability to balance it along with the studies which makes them successful in
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 studies as well as in
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future
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the future
 with an excellent balanced work-
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 with a successful career and a great family
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. They are more capable of concentrating on studies while in the class, which certainly assists in obtaining higher grades. In conclusion, I believe that regular mandatory sports periods in the timetable in each
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makes
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make
 a healthy generation. Making
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 initiatives rather than making sports optional will assist the children for better
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life
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 and an active lifestyle.
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