News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Now
days news reports
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days, news reports
day's news reports
day's day's news reports
are published with images. Many people argue that publishing newscast with images is
most effective
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more effective
than its context. I believe with
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statement and will
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discuss how photographs help to engage the audience and
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talk about how photos beautify the reports. The primary reason why the images are important is because images capture more public attention to watch reports.
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is to say that a picture says a thousand words and realistic nature of news gains
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a more audience
.
As a result
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,
viewership
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of a news channel increases as watching reports on television becomes more interesting. A recent study by MIT revealed that displaying relevant
news videos
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news, videos
during news shows results in a 60% increase in
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.
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, it is clearly evident that why including news clips is an important aspect. Another primary reason why photos are prominent is that fact that to display the news article aesthetically good.
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is because
pictures
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the pictures
in news reports help to sort and distinguish between different articles.
As a result
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,
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the readability
of a newspaper increases and its readers are focused to read articles in which they are interested.
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, newspapers published in the early 20th century did not include any images and
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they were very dull and did not attract a wide audience as compared to the 21st century.
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, it is clear that images play a pivotal role in reports to make them interesting. In conclusion, I affirm my opinion that photographs in the media are the most important consideration which helps news agencies to increase their
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and readability of published reports.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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