Should young people follow older people's example or it is good for them to challenge older people's opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Though some people are of the opinion that
the newer
Suggestion
the new
generation
should follow the older
generation
's example, others argue that
the newer
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the new
generation
should be
skeptical
denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion
sceptical
of views held by the elderly. In my opinion, both points of views hold merit and specific situations in life dictate which view to follow. Older people usually have wisdom which comes after decades of practical experience.
This
wisdom is particularly useful in situations which are recurring in nature. As an evidence for
this
, the following excerpt "Throughout history, the only pattern we have seen is that
instances
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instance
repeat themselves" from the book of authors Will and Ariel Durant is famously quoted. Examples
for
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of
this
recurring nature of history in the present day are marriage or career advice which can be as relevant for us today as they were for our elders, a
generation
ago. Some events or ideas are
generation
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generating
specific which may not repeat themselves in similar forms. Thinking of the elderly becomes dated when applied to these current problems.
For example
, many older people have very strong views on
use
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the use
of recreational drugs or homosexuality.
Although
as the world modernized, these things have become largely acceptable to the younger citizens.
Hence
, it may be wise to be
skeptical
denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion
sceptical
of opinions of
old
Suggestion
older
people in situations which evolve over time. In conclusion, in my opinion the youth should use its judgement when it decides to follow elderly citizens. As a template, young people may see if the specific situation is repetitive in nature or not.

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