Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

The knowledge that someone gets about something is called
information
. In my opinion, all kinds of
informations including
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information, including
information including
scientific research, business and academic have to be shared among people in the best interest of human beings. In ancient times, people had very sincere relations among them. They not only shared
informations but
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information, but
information but
informs but
also
exchanged goods among them in order to strengthen their relations
as well economy
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as well as economy
. In the present
world
, everyone is in hurry to lead the
world
in a specific field.
Information
sharing is very common nowadays in almost all the field of life like research, business, health and education.
However
, it is important to understand the nature of
information
while sharing it.
For example
, certain
informations
a message received and understood
information
like those regarding natural disasters, road accidents and harmful diseases require no delay in time.
Such
informations
a message received and understood
information
must be spread immediately in order to
saves
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save
the lives of certain people. The recent advancements in Science and Technology have turned the whole
world
into
global village
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a global village
the global village
. It has now become essential to share and gain the
information
about the changing scenario of the
world
.
The fast
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The fastest
means of communications like television, computer and
internet
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the internet
have enabled us to spread the urgent
informations
a message received and understood
information
across the globe within
micro seconds
one millionth (10^-6) of a second; one thousandth of a millisecond
microseconds
. If the progress of the
world
keeps in motion with
such
zeal and zest,
then
it will be possible to share and receive all the
informations
a message received and understood
information
instantly from each corner of
world
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the world
.
Thus
, in my opinion, all types of
informations
a message received and understood
information
inflammations
must be shared among people across the
world
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world, however
however
persons and institutions sharing
information
have to be careful about the correctness of what they share as
information
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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