School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Teachers' roles are undoubtedly vital for the development of children, to the extent that some people may claim they are more important than the students' own parents. Even though I agree that educators play a major role in the pupils' intellectual and
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
upbringing, I do not believe they could overtake the parents' place.
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The school
definitely has a huge influence on children,
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, teachers would as well.
Firstly
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, students
spend
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spends
about a
third
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of their day at school, which in turn means that a child's time for interaction with the teacher may exceed that with parents.
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, a considerable number of parents usually come home late at night, well after their offsprings have gone to bed. They
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could be exhausted after work, and that prevents them from spending quality time with their sons or daughters.
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, as students grow and move into the phase of
rebelling
refusal to accept some authority or code or convention
rebellion
against figures of authority, they are more likely to listen to a friendly tutor than a strict parent.
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, parents posses advantages that teachers do not.
For example
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, all children are more familiar with their parents than their teachers, since parents are a child's
first
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safe zone. A parent is every toddlers
first
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role model, friend, and care giver, so he or she does not need to put in much effort to influence their
child
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children
.
In addition
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to that, a teacher can never provide each student with enough attention, as the number of pupils in a single classroom requires more care than one person can give. While each family can only have so many offsprings, and
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, their needs are more likely to be met. In conclusion, school teachers and parents are both cornerstones to students' social and intellectual growth.
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, I believe that parents take the lion's share in the raising of their son or daughter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuances
  • responsibility
  • intellectual development
  • social development
  • structured learning environment
  • curriculum
  • diverse interactions
  • group activities
  • conflict resolution
  • foundational impact
  • core values
  • beliefs
  • attitudes
  • nurturing
  • joint responsibility
  • collaboration
  • continuous dialogue
  • distinct roles
  • underestimate
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