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Nowadays, globalisation make people life much easier. What is the benefits of it and give your opinion.

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Globalisation is the process of interaction and integration among people, companies and governments.
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. To embark with, the
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 benefit of
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 is transporting goods over a long distance gives us a lot of choices.
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, nowadays people can taste a
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variety
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 of fruits and vegetables. As well as wear the branded clothes of foreign countries which was not possible in past time.
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, it
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makes
 the individual and countries similar because they are starting to adapt the culture and language of
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 countries. Now
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a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
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 native are
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starting
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celebrate
 the
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of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
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 festival like
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 and new year and they are showing the interest in their festivals. To continue with my
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, globalisation develops local economy.
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is also providing
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 provided the employment of many individuals in international companies. It helps
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to increase
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person's
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 life convenient. It gives

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalisation
  • Communication gap
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Foreign investments
  • Technological advancements
  • Education and healthcare
  • International travel
  • Employment opportunities
  • Environmental awareness
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Job displacement
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