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Question-fossil fuels,such as coal,oil and natural gas,are the main source for many countries however some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power.do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Natural sources of energy play a pivotal role in the welfare of the
nation
, as there are several sources of energy are present in the environment apart from that some nations are adopting another
power
 resources like solar
power
 and wind
power
.In my opinion,
this
 is a fruitful and positive development
,
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,
to support my views reasons are listed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the
first
 and the predominant reason, it is well known that excessive use of natural resources can lead to its scarcity
,
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,
however
 substitution of resources will increase the lifespan of other natural resources as well as help to control the cost of natural resources.
For example
: as Pakistan is an economically poor
nation
 despite that it is the
first
nation
 to which has its complete solar system facility in its parliament to save electricity and its charges Moving
further
, I believe that using alternate resources
such
 as solar
power
 and wind
power
 can reduce different form of
pollution
 like: Air
pollution
, soil
pollution
,
pollution
 et
cetera which
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cetera, which
 prevents many adverse medical conditions
such
 as asthma, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease diarrhoea et cetera.
For
exam
usually large hard-shelled seed
nut
ple:bu
r
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,
ning fossi
l fuels,coa
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down, saying
l are the major contributor of air
pollution
 due to emmission of carbon dioxide in the air on t
here combu
Suggestion
economic
stion,if we minimise their usage it will decrease the air
pollution
 and risk of negetive effects on health In a nutt shell,it is pen down saying that substituting natural resources have a positive impact on ecological system as well as on economical growth of the
nation
 so it is a positive step towards the development

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