In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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In certain places in the US, teenagers are prohibited to go outside their homes without being accompanied by an adult after a certain time of the night.

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is usually called a 'curfew'. In my opinion, imposing

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curfews at night is good for the safety and well being of these young people. Going out of the house without an older guardian is not safe for teenagers.

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is especially true for a country like the United States, which has many sparsely populated towns. Having a low human population attracts wildlife and

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provides a conducive environment for predators.

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, a recent news, which became viral was about increasing wolf attacks in the south of Washington State.

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, going outdoors alone in

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places is not worth the risk for children. Going out alone at night is

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not good for the well being of teenagers.

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is because these kids are at a very tender age during which the mind and body is still developing.

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, there should be checks in place, like curfews, to ensure these children develop into healthy adults. To illustrate

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, a recent study by the professors of the University of Oxford found out that respondents who spent their early years staying awake at nights, and partying, had a greater chance of dementia after the age of 60 years.

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, it is important to keep an eye on activity of children after normal day hours for their own good. In conclusion,

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curbs on young adults are for the benefit of their own future and

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to keep them away from harm. In my view, a curfew is good for children, even if their freedom is temporarily being restricted.

Thu Oct 17 2019

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