Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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There is a believe that when an architect wants to design a
house
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, the most essential factor to put into consideration is the duty of the building and not the external look which might be attractive to the sight.
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, I strongly disagree with
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viewpoint because as much as its
appearance
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is brings income and
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in or at that place
there
is a sense of satisfaction to the
owner
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then
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its functionality is not the most important.
Although
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the outward
appearance
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cannot serve the importance of a building, it is irrefutable that
first
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impression matters a lot in life.
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means that the external
appearance
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is the
first
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thing that the
owner
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or people who might want to use it would see and if it could make an investment profitable to the
owner
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,
then
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it
it is
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considered the most important. While doing rental advert or sales of building on the website,
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, the landlords uploads external features to attract prospective tenants and an attractive
appearance
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attracts people to make enquiries.
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, people might go
for
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to
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attractive
buildings
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building
without
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take the trouble to do something; concern oneself
bothering
to check the functionality of the
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,
hence
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making payment for either rental or purchase of a building. Apart from
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, an attractive building gives
sense
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a sense
of
filment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
to both the landlords and the occupants of the
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.
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, most
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house
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owners
fills
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proud to invite their friends and families in their
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because they want to show off the lovely place where they live. To illustrate, out of excitement and
filling
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
fulfilled a lot of people do
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warming to celebrate. Assuming that the
house
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, is ugly and the
owner
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is not happy with the final
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, he would
ashmed
feeling shame or guilt or embarrassment or remorse
ashamed
assumed
to come people to see where he stays. Clearly,
out ward
relating to physical reality rather than with thoughts or the mind
outward
appearance
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is the most important. In conclusion, even though the external building of a
house
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can never serve as the function of the
house
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, the excitement which the
owner
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and occupants of the building having with an attractive
house
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makes me to completely refute the idea that its functionality is the most important.
Besides
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this
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, it is the
appearance
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of a building that most useful while marketing it to the public for either rental or sales.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aesthetics
  • functionality
  • architectural integrity
  • practicality
  • usability
  • form versus function
  • cost efficiency
  • user-centric design
  • cultural value
  • emotional impact
  • architectural landmark
  • tourism appeal
  • practical design features
  • maintenance costs
  • safety considerations
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