Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is a conflicting views about people's situations in
life
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. While some people think that accepting a negative
conditions
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condition
is the best,
such
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as lack of job satisfaction and financial
incapicity
lack of intellectual power
incapacity
, others believe that striving hard to improve is a better option.
This
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essay will discuss both sides of the
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
and
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iterate my view. On the one hand, it is often considered by some that
it
it is
it's
best to accept ones bad situations. It simply means that they have given up
in
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on
life
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despite the opportunities which they could take advantage of in
life
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. Even though they did not get
there
of them or themselves
their
dream jobs and are unable to take care of
there
of them or themselves
their
needs, they are comfortable with
such
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hardship. In a workplace,
for example
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, if they are cleaners and collecting low wages, they would neither improve their skills not educational backgrounds rather, they would be relaxed being in that position believing that they have accepted their fate.
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, resulting
to
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in
an unsatisfactory career work, depression as well as poverty. Clearly, they have accepted
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adverse
situations
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situation
,
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, there are people who believe in a saying that ' Provided there is
life
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, there is hope'.
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, they explore every opportunity that they have even if it is stressful. To illustrate, people study or learn new skills while working in order to be promoted in their workplace or get a grow their career.
As a result
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,
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they could get a better job offer with higher salaries, thereby,
improvig
getting higher or more vigorous
improving
improved
their financial strength as well as satisfactory career. Obviously, it is better not to relent in
life
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. In conclusion, I believe that remaining in a static situation without doing anything could lead to an adverse condition, it is best to keep pushing, improving one's skills and educational level in order to improve financially
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it would be tiring if an immediate result is not seen.
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, people should never give up and remain in one condition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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