Some people believe that joining a gym is the best way to keep fit. Others believe that other activities are the best way to keep fit.

Fitness

is a very important aspect of our life. To keep themselves fit some people believe that

gym

is the best

way

. But others believe that

involment

the act of sharing in the activities of a group

involvement

in other activities are

best

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the best way

way

to keep fit. In my opinion,

gym

is the solution to keep

fit but

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fit, but

not the only one. Nowadays people are aware about their

fitness

. Some people joining a

gym

to be fit and keep the

fitness

. Joining a

gym

is

best

Suggestion

the best way

way

to keep

fitness

Suggestion

fit

, because in

gym

we get proper

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

guidence

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

guidance

. Without proper

guidence

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

guidance

we can keep our

activities but

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activities, but

that may not be enough for

fitness

.

For example

, most of the famous body builders are associated with a

gym

to build their body. So joining

gym

Suggestion

a gym

can be a good

solutuion

a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution

solution

to be fit. Some people

also

believe that to keep fit other activities are the best

way

.

Yes it

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Yes, it

is the best

way

.

Today people

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Today, people

are busy with their work. They do not have enough time to allocate for a

gym

.

However

, they can keep their

fitness

easily by 30 minutes of brisk walking. Some can use stairs as

an other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

activities

Suggestion

activity

. Various types of sports are

also

a

substitue

a set whose members are members of another set; a set contained within another set

subset

of

gym

Suggestion

the gym

. To conclude,

fitness

is important for everybody. People may choose their paths as per

convenient

Suggestion

convenience

.

Gym

Suggestion

The gym

is always a part of

fitnees but

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fitness, but

fitness but

there are many people who do not like to attend. They prefer various outdoor sports, walking in the park or

street

Suggestion

the street

alongside to feel the city life. People should choose their path as per their needs and convenience.