Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views.

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Since the big bang multitudes of planets were created, but the only planet to sustain life so far in
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vast universe is still the planet earth.Life was developed and perfected over millions of cycles of evolution to see the forms which we see today.Due to rapid destruction of living things
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essay explores that environmental damage is a much more pressing concern than just the loss of one specific living form. On one hand,
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he fast pace of modernization is gobbling up the habitats of species and is destroying the natural balance needed to sustain a healthy ecosystem.
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the African mammoth,
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nce a mighty elephant disappeared when it was massively hunted in Africa.
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uncontrolled and unregulated hunting led to the complete annihilation of all the other microsystems, which were dependant on that animal.
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the loss of a particular breed is an important indicator of the destruction. But
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, if we take into view that rapid urbanization with its necessary evils like greatly increased the need of fossil fuels to derive mega energy projects is depleting the planet earth of its resources.
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is creating the problems of global warming and is leading to climate change.Glacier caps are melting and water levels are rising everywhere.
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, not just one particular progeny, but in fact all of beings are in danger of extinction if
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problem is not dealt with quickly. In conclusion the loss of a specific living being is a big disadvantage, but there are more concerns which will eventually lead to much greater carnage.
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is the need of the hour to ponder over the solutions to
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dilemma.Let's hope sanity prevails before the
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big man made extinction.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • therefore
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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