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Many business in the world today are run by family members. Do the advantages of family-run business outweigh the disadvantages?

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We currently live in an era in which
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a business
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 days
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a lot
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unite
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Otherwise, most
 of corporations development to international and
also
 open in different countries
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even
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Even
 though many people would agree with management from private owner
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However
 the negative aspects should be pondered as well.
Firstly
, some people find the successful
business
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Because
 several reasons
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One
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that is
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meanwile strange
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 persons could
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Secondly
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 dedication in their
business
 lead to a good result
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Indeed
 the trust in relation between family members
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has kept
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the totality of surrounding conditions
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the quality of being a hindrance
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the position
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The
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business
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For
 example the majority of hired in family companies depend on relatives bonds
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In
 conclusion, it is evident that
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a family business
family businesses
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