Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can get a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Several researches have shown that criminals do not have

high level

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a high level

high levels

of

education

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.

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, it

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is believed

that providing

education

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for those who are in prison is the best option to obtain crime reduction because they can find a job after being released. I personally do think

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solution could only address the problem to some extents. On the one hand,

education

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for prisoner brings a wide range of positive impact on their intellectual. Providing moral and social

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could help criminals to understand in depth the value of behaving properly.

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, specific

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might help them control their tempers and work well with other people.

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,

policer

the force of policemen and officers

police

can teach prisoner with different facilitation methods to trigger their negative ideas and

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help them to calm down and change the energy into something would not result in any damages. After re-integrating the

society

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, community have a certain understanding of how

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have improved during prisoning time and

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those of people can get a job to work as normal.

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, receiving an

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does not mean they are accepted by

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. Vocational

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in prison might prepare them skills to make ends meet and they might be able to get a job.

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, social stigma

is still existed

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still exists

for those who was imprisoned. The stigma and self-stigma, which cannot be controlled by special

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for criminals, would lead to re-commit

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of

crime when they are in the real world receiving negative comments. In conclusion, educating prisoners is a great preparation for people to reintegrate into the

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society but

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society, but

might not be the best way because other solutions

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as sensitizing

society

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need to be taken into account.