In past the role of teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to wide sources of information. There is, therefore, no role of teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree

The world is changing and how students have
access
to
information
is
also
greatly improving. In the past, teachers
serves
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serve
as the only source of passing
information
to students in majorly all
schools but
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schools, but
this
as changed as most students now have
direst
command with authority
direct
access
to
information
. But some are saying that
as a result
of
this
easy
access
to
information
by
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with
the students, there should be no need for teachers in modern education. In my own opinion, I totally disagree that that there is no
role
of teachers in Modern Education as a
reult
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
result
of students having
access
to data.
Firstly
, the
internet as
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internet, as
played a
tremedous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
role
on
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in
how students gain
information
and it has widely
improve
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improved
the ability and reasoning of students as they will not only depend on their teachers to get the required details needed for their advancement and sometimes for a research purpose. But the position of the teachers in
this
situation is the ensure that the students are able to use the
information
in the best way.
Although
, students may have
access
to
information
, often time they don't know how to use it in the right way.
For example
, when I was writing my final year project, it was so easy for me to get all required data through the
internet but
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internet, but
it was difficult putting them together to make a meaningful research. It was at
this
point that my project supervisor played a
role
as a teacher in ensuring that it was properly arranged.
Secondly
, in
this
new age of internet with easy
gain
the act of departing
going
to google, it is very convenient to have nearly all required
information
for anything
by
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from
the students and with the level at which technology is developing there might be a time when the number of teachers required will
reduced
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reduce
.
For example
, it was shown on Television recently in China on how all the facilities in a classroom as
been
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being
digitalized
put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalised
meaning that there is no need for a teacher in the class.
In addition
, teachers play a key
role
in the life of students

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