Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

When discussing the advantages and disadvantages of museum fees, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some people think museums should be free so that visitors can come regardless of their financial ability. Others, including myself, believe that because museums have many financial expenses they should charge a maintenance fee. In the following essay, I will provide reasons and examples to support my opinion. One argument in favour of my
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
is that by charging an
enterance
something that provides access (to get in or get out)
entrance
fee museums have more money to invest in the reconstruction of valuable historical items. The New
york
the English royal house (a branch of the Plantagenet line) that reigned from 1461 to 1485; its emblem was a white rose
York
Times,
for example
, reported that the yearly
expences
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
experiences
expense
of
art maintenance
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the art maintenance
among
meuseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
was
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were
over 1,000,000 dollars, and that more than 50% of it comes from ticket sales.
This
shows that admission fees
is
Suggestion
are
essential for
museums maintenance
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the museum's maintenance
museum's maintenance
. Another view to support my assumption is that nowadays museums are
focred
produced by or subjected to forcing
forced
to change their exhibitions frequently in order to attract families. A recent poll performed among Israeli families reported that more than 30% of the families will not go with their families to see the same museums twice. In order to fight
this
many places change their exhibition regularly leading to higher expenses.
This
shows that admission fees are required so that
mueseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
can remain
attractable
Suggestion
attractive
. In conclusion, I maintain that charging people for admission fee outweigh its disadvantages because it help
saving
Suggestion
save
our historical valuables and help museums remaining an enjoyable place to visit.

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