Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Write at least 250 words.

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As the general trend is observed people choose big salary over job satisfaction,

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In my opinion people who are happy for who or what they

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for produce an output greater than those who do

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that they are not satisfied with.

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would like to say that no job is stress free

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usually there is

certain amount

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a certain amount

of stress associated with every profession out there and it depends on the people if they can put up with it. One of the reasons that people choose job satisfaction over high paying salary might be because they

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under someone and be the bosses of their own,

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is how a lot of people put up individual business after they have crossed

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the age

of taking risks and

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exactly how Flipkart an Indian e-commerce website was set up by 2 guys who were fed up with their "nine to five" jobs.

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stated earlier being happy with the output of the

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is an important factor for people refusing jobs with a higher pay. As a lot of NGO's

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goes

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participants have quit their full

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jobs and have begun contributing to the society in one way or the other. There are more than 2000 full

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intrepid workers from

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Isha

foundation who have devoted their

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and energy for the good of people. Their

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replantation

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of over 20 million trees has been revolutionary and has been actually helpful to public. So we can say that stress and the output of the

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play an important role in someone choosing what or who they want to

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for rather than just

gong

the act of departing

going

after a high salary.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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295 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Economic migration
Asylum seeker
Diaspora
Expatriate
Refugee status
Work permit/visa
Demographic shift
Naturalization
Xenophobia
Cultural assimilation
Multiculturalism
Social cohesion
Immigration policies
Border control
Undocumented immigrants

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Write at least 250 words.

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries around the world , rural people are moving to cities ,so the population in the country side is decreasing Do you think it is a positive or a negative development

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