show the changes of visitors number in 3 major airports in New York city ?

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The chart depicts the number of passengers using
plane
Suggestion
planes
to travel in three major
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airport
Suggestion
airports
in New York city from 1995 to 2000 It can be seen that there was an upward trending in LaGuardia while two others didn’t have any
clearly
Suggestion
clear
trends The number of people using three
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airport
Suggestion
airports
all increased between 1995 and 1997
.
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.
And John F.Kennedy
airport
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aso
in addition
also
Asia
had the highest passengers in 1997 and during 5 years
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However there
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However, there
was a surprised report in 1998 when Jhn F.Kennedy had the
lowset
lowest in rank or importance
lowest
last
lawsuit
umber of
travellers althought
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travellers, although
travellers although
2 others still increased
.
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.
The trending in three
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airport
Suggestion
airports
not changed till 200
.
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.
People visited John F.Kennedy and LaGuardia increased dramarically while Newark
airport
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hadn’t have any change after 3 year
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