Some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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incapable of being avoided or prevented

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rise of technologies and

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as smartphone

make

engage in

do

is use spread through people and family member, even children nowadays have type of mobile phone, which is

unfaverabel

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

for others. In my opinion, I think children ought not have

smarphone

in the early age. On the one hand, the main reason for those who give children phone is that they feel safe when they keep

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make physical contact with, come in contact with

touch

to with their kids

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with their kids

.

For example

, in the case of emergency they can reach

to

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for

them after just a call.

Also

, most of

families parents

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families, parents

are working both parents so, they spend most of their time away from their kids,

therefore

, they prefer to give their kids a communication device

such

as

mobile phone

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mobile phones

a mobile phone

.

On the other hand

, I would agree with those who choose to do not offer

smarphone

for younger children for two reasons mainly.

Firstly

, gaining these devices early may affect

children

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children's

child

child's

health, to illustrate, these electronic

diveses

an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'

devices

devises

emission

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not agitated; without losing self-possession

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screen

light which may have a negative effort

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in

their eyes, and the more hours of uses the more

unfoverable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

consequnces

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

. Another argument is that

such

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a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose

budget

leads to

addication

being abnormally tolerant to and dependent on something that is psychologically or physically habit-forming (especially alcohol or narcotic drugs)

addiction

education

and it

consider

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considers

as an anti-social device, for instant, if children spend long time in front of their smartphone, they will affect their social community and losing some of communicating skills

as a result

the will be unable to make real

friendship

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friends

. To

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decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion

conclude

, after a careful analysis of the two points, I believe that children should not have phones as it will

afect

have an effect upon

affect

their health and social

commuincation

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

communication

communications

, and they will have only virtual friends

instead

of real ones.