show the changes of the number of visitors in three main major airports in New York city from 1995 to 2000

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The graph gives information about how many people visited New York city in three airports from 1995 to 2000 Overall

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we can see that a fluctuate t

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turn

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in John F.Kennedy airport while 2 others saw an upward trend

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between 1995 and 2000

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Firstly, in

Firstly in

the beginning period there were 25 million of visitors in John F.Kennedy airport

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This

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number

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nreased

made greater in size or amount or degree

increased

over y

ear

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a year

and reached a peak in 1997 n

ealy

(of actions or states) slightly short of or not quite accomplished; all but

nearly

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only

50 m

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(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

millions

of passengers

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After that

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it decreased d

ramarically

in a very impressive manner

dramatically

and f

appropriate to; intended for

for

forth

only over 30 million of visitors

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In 1999 at the end of p

eriod

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the period

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it went up to 45 m

illions

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million

travellers

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LaGuardia began at 35 million in 1995

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It rose r

emarkably

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remarkable

year by year and in 200

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this

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number

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nearly double with the b

iginning

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big inning

number

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Newark airport was nearly the same as LaGuardia

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it increased s

igniicantly

in a statistically significant way

significantly

and reached over 40 millions of visitors in 1998

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After that

this

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number

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had no change to the end of period

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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173 words

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show the changes of the number of visitors in three main major airports in New York city from 1995 to 2000

Fully explain your ideas

The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Ordinary people copy famous people whome they see on TV and magazines. Do you think this is a positive development?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What can be done to solve this problem?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?