show the changes of the village park's map 10 years ago and now

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The map d

ecrive

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describes

describe

the r

ansfromation

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of a village park from 10 years ago to now Overall, it can clearly be seen that the woods d

isapear

get lost, as without warning or explanation

disappear

disappeared

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there are 2 new areas. In the

last

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ten years, there was a car park which can contain 20 cars. In t

definite article

the

otyh

in a northern direction

north

of the map, there were 2 tennis courts and

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to the tennis c

outr

an assembly (including one or more judges) to conduct judicial business

court

was a

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area

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where c

hilren

a young person of either sex

children

can play i

nside

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A large football pitch took place in m

iddle

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the middle

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In the n

orth east

the compass point midway between north and east; at 45 degrees

northeast

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there were a pond and woods In the present

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as we can see

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There are so many c

hange

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changes

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The

car park has expanded which can contain 50 cars j

nstead

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of 20 cars in the

last

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10 years. The tennis c

out

an assembly (including one or more judges) to conduct judicial business

court

Court

has extended

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The children p

lat

participate in games or sport

play

plant

plot

area

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has improved i

nto

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2different areas

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there are c

hildren

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children's

lat

participate in games or sport

play

area

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ad children s

olf

yielding readily to pressure or weight

soft

safe

play

area

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. The football pitch has reduced

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to it

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there is a toilet in the n

orth east

the compass point midway between north and east; at 45 degrees

northeast

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people built a picnic

area

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The pond h

as replaced

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has, replaced

by b

oating

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boat

a body of (usually fresh) water surrounded by land

lake

and the woods has c

utted

separate with or as if with an instrument

cut

quieted

down and it a

hnged

forming or set at an angle

angled

into the café

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Around the map there is a cycle path

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Where people can drive their bycicle on

this

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road

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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show the changes of the village park's map 10 years ago and now

Fully explain your ideas

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In present era, ebooks are replacing traditional books. What are the pros and cons of this notion?

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

some people think it id important to construct new buildings rather than wasting money on maintaing old ones.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?