show the changes of the village park's map 10 years ago and now

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The map

illustrate

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illustrates

how the village

park

had transformed from 100 ago and now Overall, it can be seen that

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there are many changes happened between now and the past

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Besides

that

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there has some project be

exoanded

increased in extent or size or bulk or scope

expanded

extended

In 10 years ago

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there had two tennis

court but

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court, but

courts but

courts courts but

now

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we build more to become 4 tennis

cout

an assembly (including one or more judges) to conduct judicial business

courts

court

the car

park

is expanded from 20 cars to 50 cars

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In the North – East of the

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map

main

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there divided

Suggestion

they've divided

they're divided

they divide

children area from

children

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children's

soft play area the football pitch becomes smaller after 10 years The toilet is

constrcted

make by combining materials and parts

constructed

constricted

contracted

in the East of the village

park

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They build the cycle

parh

a course of conduct

path

around the

park

. In the East – South of the map , the pond which beside the woods has been replaced by a boating lake and the wood had changed into the case

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show the changes of the village park's map 10 years ago and now

Fully explain your ideas

Many religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Today the internet has replaced traditional books as a source of information. Discuss the Advantage & Disadvantage.

Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some countries, children under 16 are not allowed to leave school by law and get full-time work. Is this a good or bad thing ?