In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children in remote areas of developing country are not receiving sufficient

education

so that some people think that building more learning spaces and having more teachers can address the issue.

In contrast

, others argue that

internet

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the internet

and computer would be a solution. I personally agree with the

first

idea because of several reasons. Having

computer

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a computer

computers

and

internet

are great tools to access to an endless

education

source. Online courses on the

internet

have a wide range of level, which students can easily find a suitable program to study gradually. Youngsters

then

have a freedom of choice to select courses they desire to learn whenever and wherever they want while

school

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schools

the school

and teachers are

opened

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open

and available

in

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at

a certain time of the day and during

school

semesters only.

However

, online source is an opened archive where people can upload any kind of information included unreliable ones. While young individuals do not have sufficient skills to sift information and have free access to the

internet

,

this

might result in a low quality of self-

education

.

On the other hand

, teachers and schools bring a variety of positive impacts on children in mountainous areas. Going to

school

, offsprings

are provided

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provide

a friendly environment and motivation from peers and teachers to learn not only academic

knowledge but

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knowledge, but

also

life skills

such

as

team work

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

and public speaking.

Furthermore

, teachers teach standard

school

syllable, monitor and assess students’ performance on a weekly or semester

basic

a relation that provides the foundation for something

basis

.

Thus

, young people can be developed both mentally and physically when they are in

school

. In conclusion,

although

offering a tool to access to the

internet

is

as

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a

great solution to improve the accessibility to

education

of remote children, I think it is still better to have more physical

education

places and teachers for students to get

education

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an education

.