some people think that instead of preventing climate change. We need to find a way to live with it. to what extent do you agree 9or0 disagree.

Climate
change
is the greatest threat to the existence of life on earth.
Fair amount
Suggestion
The fair amount
of people
argue
Suggestion
argues
that
instead
of preventing the
climate
change
we should make a habit to live with it. I do not completely accord with it because we still have time to tackle
issue
Suggestion
issues
and reduce impact on
climate
of earth. To embark on, Global warming is the main cause of
climate
change
. If both people and government take an appropriate
actions
Suggestion
action
it can be reduced to
great extent
Suggestion
a great extent
.
For example
, the government should stop the generation of power from fossil
fuels which
Accept comma addition
fuels, which
causes carbon
emmison
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
and increase global warming. Government should
also
invest
on
Suggestion
in
green energy resources like wind, solar and hydropower. Another practical solution is
governmnet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should impose "Green taxes" from industries and
vechicles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
which emit
carbobs
an abundant nonmetallic tetravalent element occurring in three allotropic forms: amorphous carbon and graphite and diamond; occurs in all organic compounds
carbons
. Individuals must
also
reduce the usage of fossil fuels and
strat
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
start
using public transport. Trying to live with the
climate
change
instead
of preventing it is the dangerous idea because in future
climate
change
will
turm
change orientation or direction, also in the abstract sense
turn
our planet to inhabitable. Due to the global warming polar ice melting causing sea level to
raise
move upward
rise
. When sea level raises coastal cities get submerged into the water. Let us not forget the fact that most of our cities are
near by
close at hand
nearby
oceans and seas.
Climate
change
also lead
Suggestion
also leads
is also leading
has also led
to various natural calamities like cyclones, floods and droughts. To conclude,
climate
change
has
drastic affect
Suggestion
a drastic affect
drastic affects
to the existence of our lives on earth. To an extent
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
cannot accord to
this
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
that we should find a way to live it.
Climate
change
is threating
Suggestion
is threatening
is threaten
threatens
has threatened
is threatened
our very existence on
this
planet and it is high time we did something to tackle
this
alarming issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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