You have seen an advertisement in Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job? • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.
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Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Muaj Khan, I am writing in regards with an advert which I saw in Australian Magazin
this
morning. I am passionate to do this
work.
I would like this
job for two main reasons. Firstly
, I love kids and spending time with them is fun. Let's take my own example, I am actually from grandparent
and extended family background where all our uncle and aunt kinds not only live togetherCorrect article usage
a grandparent
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
grow with family values. I have an
experience raising cousins Correct article usage
apply
from
all different ages like 2 to 8 years old. Change preposition
of
Secondly
, I have recently done a First
Aid course.
I would be the best suitable person for this
work as I have always understood the needs of children as well as this
I have learned a lot while looking after them. To illustrate, I have been rewarded and appreciated in my current job, which I am doing with an Italian family. I am looking after their two young children aged 5 and 9. Another thing your child will love is my jolly and caring nature, she will enjoy my company.
If I get this
job, I would love to visit different places, meet new people, and also
know their culture which I can do in my free time for sure during my time in Australia.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by naziya.bustani on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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