Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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It is an undeniable fact that some people are god gifted and possess skills which

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on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

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become hard for us to acquire

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Even experts have proven that traits which we inherit from our ancestors are more powerful in developing our

personality

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personality, however

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I believe that

experience

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is more powerful in moulding us at different phases of

life

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than the traits which we get from our ancestors

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I will discuss the major impact

experience

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put on our outlook. There are manifold reasons to support my viewpoint.

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first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

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with

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experience we

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experience, we

learn varied aspects of

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result, we

get to know how to survive in

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when a

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student

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goes abroad

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they encountered with different situations and have many sweet and bitter experiences

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which teach them a lot of

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lessons

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They learn how to communicate and adjust with people of diverse culture and tradition in

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nation.

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, when we go through any hardship of

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life

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life, then

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we know about our strengths and

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a good decision maker

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, a 23

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old blind boy who was rejected for

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by IIT and even many times from other institutes

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he took wise decision and with his intellectual skills he opened his own big firm and become CEO of 25crore firm.

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field which

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seems to us impossible

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To cite an example, when we work as a naïve in any sector that time we make

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lots

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mistakes, but

later on with practical work we become more efficient and perform task frequently which we find very hard in our initial days at

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the workplace

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After

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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

aforesaid viewpoints

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it has been proven

experience

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plays

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a vital role

in our lifetime

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become more mature and more understandable with practical things only

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

nature vs. nurture debate
genetic inheritance
personality traits
behavior patterns
heritability
twins studies
malleable characteristics
upbringing
environmental influences
critical periods
language acquisition
worldview
innate traits
personal experiences
psychological development
epigenetics
adaptive behaviors
cultural imprinting
temperament
social conditioning

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Fully explain your ideas

Students at schools and universities learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources (e.g. television, the Internet). Do you agree or disagree?

All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is problem what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem.