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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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Historically, benchmarking has been used to proceed with
the
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performance testing,
whereas
 only recently the
system
 availability has gained recognition and respect because of high-availability technologies
moreover
systems
 are expected to operate continually (24/7). Not only is downtime unacceptable, but its cost can be enormous, as noted in [3],
system
 downtime can exceed $500 0000 per hour, stressing the importance of a highly available
infrastruc- ture
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infrastructure
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. Increasingly, individuals and organizations are developing or procuring
sophis- ticated
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 computing and communication
systems
 for which the high
availabilty
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availability
is a requisite whether to service a set of cash dispensers, control a
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 constellation, an
airplane
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, a nuclear plant, telecom
systems
, emergency telecommunications or a radiation therapy device
,
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 or to maintain the
confi- dentiality
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 of a sensitive database. The consequences are serious if even parts of
such
systems
 are unavailable when their services are needed. Each type of
system
 has different availability requirements, depending on their
usages
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.
For example
, on-board avionic computer
systems
 have entirely different standards than an engineering simulation
system
,
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 or even a network storage
system
. we could provide an example
a
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traditional RAID (redundant array of independent disks) setup on a commodity
system
. The
characteris- tics
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 of that
system
 would be quite distinguishable from that of a dedicated NAS (network addressed storage)
system
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • genetics
  • nutritional awareness
  • processed foods
  • fast food
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative measures
  • tax incentives
  • urban planning
  • community gardens
  • wellness initiatives
  • dietary guidelines
  • physical fitness
  • calorie-dense
  • portion control
  • metabolic rate
  • health literacy
  • food deserts
  • work-life balance
  • junk food
  • BMI (Body Mass Index)
  • non-communicable diseases
  • food labeling
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