Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit crimes

In recent years, the overwhelming majority of JUVENILE DELINQUENCY has been a hard riddle for each individual as well as our whole society
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Consequently
, to combat young crime, there is a recommendation that courts should IMPOSE ADULT PUNISHMENTS ON TEENAGE CRIMINALS. In my opinion
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this
reflects the intolerance and inaccuracy of law due to the following reasons. The
first
reason as to why adult punishments for teenage crime are UNDULY STRICT is that they should be given a
second
chance. The offence of youngsters stems from their immature minds, which is reported in most circumstances.
As a result
, they may misbehave inattentively, not always their nature. Take,
for example
, a
gameaholic
, whose crime is mainly caused by not only excessive game playing but
also
the lack of parental control.
Therefore
, judges,
instead
of imprisonment,
sentence
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the sentence
a sentence
of death, should LESSEN PUNISHMENTS
such
as sending young offenders to reeducation camps.
This
would help them to make an easier recovery to restart a new phase of their life.
Besides
, it is unfair and unpersuasive if a child is enforced to submit the same punishment as an adult, especially in case of PETTY CRIME. Obviously, in most cases, levels of
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
seriousness are unequal and juvenile delinquency arises from different motives. What if teenage criminals are obligated to accept
punishments
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the punishments
which are only suitable for adults? How could they endure when being imprisoned or beaten in
jailhouses
as though they killed someone
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Not only does
this
reflect the lack of justice, it
also
may lead to WRONG VERDICTS during the process of criminal judgment. In conclusion, wrongdoings done by teenagers are understandable when they REACH THE AGE OF PUBERTY.
Accordingly
, rather than penalize strictly, legal bodies should take more appropriate measures to REHABILIATE YOUNG TROUBLEMAKERS.
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