Tourism is an excellent way to develop a country, but it can also cause harm. How can countries ensure that tourism benefits the development?

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It is irrefutable that
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has become the backbone of many economies of the world. In
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fact, many
countries rely on the
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dollar for their development.
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has
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led to damage
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the natural environment and
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in
many places the
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places have been so much littered that they have ceased being a
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attraction any more. In a way
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is killing
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. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss ways in which countries can ensure sustainable
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. The
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step towards sustainable
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would be that tourists benefit the local residents of the host country rather than the owners of the five star hotels where they normally stay. The governments and
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companies could educate the local residents to make a part of their
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home
as lodges for the tourists.
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way the tourists could stay as paying guests and the local people could earn.
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would be a win-win situation for both – the
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and the locals and there would be more chances of
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cultural
exchange. Another cause of concern which goes against
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is that tourists litter the place by throwing plastic bottles and wrappers of eatables here and there. For
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the governments could ensure that dust bins are placed at regular intervals and are
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evacuated regularly. Neat and clean
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restrooms
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should be provided for the convenience of the tourists. The government should
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limit the number of
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tourists, according
to the capacity of the
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place.
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, it is sometimes the case that tourists don’t respect the local culture and
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the local people do not welcome them.
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can be taken care of by the
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guides and
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operating countries to educate the tourists about the important and sensitive parts of the local customs.
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, when tourists visit religious places in India, the
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guides could tell them to take off their shoes outside.
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, some degree of pollution is inevitable as tourists travel by air, but while travelling locally, the
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could use a non polluting source
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as a rickshaw. They could even opt for an elephant ride
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of an automobile where available.
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would ensure that even the common man would welcome them with open arms. After all, the development of a country includes better standards of living for the common man.
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, it is in the hands of the
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to promote eco-
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and take some responsibility
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for
the environment. It has been well said that, ‘a good
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is one who takes away nothing but photographs and leaves behind nothing but footprints’. To put it in a nutshell, I pen
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down, saying
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tourism but
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tourism, but
it can be checked with some simple steps taken by the governments,
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companies and guides, the local people and the
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himself.
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