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The given table chart illustrates the number of workers worked in different Australian sectors from the
year
 1989 to 2009. Data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, at the beginning of the period, the highest proportion of working in a manufacturing segment,
However
; the
least
immediately past
last
 workers worked in the tourism
sector
. But, at the end of the period, the maximum number of workers moved in the Healthcare
sector
 and least
were
we are
we're
 still in the tourism industry. In 1989, 15% of workers employed in the manufacturing
sector
, but, after
two
 decades its percentage dropped to 9.8%. The percentage of workers employed in the Retail
sector
also
 declined from 11.8 to 10.1 between the
two
 years. In the
year
 1989, the number of workers worked in the Healthcare
sector
 was 2% more than in the construction industry, but, in the end, the difference between the
two
 increased by 1% as compared to the
year
 1989. The education and tourism segment accounted for 6.8% and 5.5% of workers respectively in the
year
 1989 but, in the end, more than 7% of workers worked in these
two
 industries.

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