Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Often poor countries have limited or no career opportunities for talented and educated people. The essay agrees that developed nations must provide job opportunities for the above mentioned category of individuals and will discuss the reasons for it with related examples.
Firstly
, skills and knowledge of competent people should not be wasted. Poor countries does not have the environment for
such
people and most of them are unable to apply their studies and talent in contributing to the economy and society.
As a result
their potential to change the future of the
country is being not
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country is not being
utilized. For instant, a
person
may complete a doctoral degree education
sector but
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sector, but
they are unable to do any research
on
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in
the field or contribute to the education sector of the particular
country
, simply because the individual does not have
necessary environment
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the necessary environment
to contribute to.
Secondly
, if a
person
has the capability to improve his or her life in a better way than the
person
should not be prohibited
in
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from
doing so. When rich countries give
chance
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a chance
the chance
to work in those countries they are able to get higher salary, improved medical care and other basic necessities.
For example
, a
person
may be getting double salary in a developed
country
compare to poor
country
as a result
his living standard will improve.
Also
the
person
will be able to enjoy the facilities of the rich
country
like fast and flexible transportation, quality education
….
Accept space
….
etc.
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Etc.
To conclude, competent people should be given chance to work in rich countries as their talent and knowledge should not be wasted as well as they should be given opportunity to make their lives better.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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