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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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 as a source of domestic household
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 is becoming more desirable because many individuals and governments are concerned that burning fossil fuels adds carbon to the atmosphere and
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 accelerates global warming and climate change. Others feel that nuclear
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 is potentially unsafe, and do not like its associated pollution from radioactive waste.
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, many researchers and consumers have looked at alternative sources of
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 and have found that solar
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 has many benefits and few drawbacks. The main advantage of solar
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 is that after the initial installation, it is entirely free and renewable, and there are no extra costs involved in producing
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. Solar
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 is silent and environmentally friendly as well-it does not destroy or poison the ecosystem.
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 is because the raw material; sunshine, does not need to be extracted or refined, so there are no pollutants or toxic residue produced. Another major advantage is that it is produced where it is needed so there is no
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 wasted on and maintenance of the new technology for solar panels which are
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 becoming less expensive more available and much more efficient. The greatest drawback of solar
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 is that it is totally reliant on sunlight, which is not always constant. In fact, there are some regions where it may not be practicable, as it does not work at night
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 from daytime sunshine must be stored in large batteries
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 panels lend to be big and cumbersome A major drawback for some is that the initial purchase and installation of the equipment is costly In my view, the benefits of a clean, quiet, renewable, eco-friendly source of
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 far outweigh the drawbacks, provided that there is sufficient sunlight Available to make
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 source of
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 feasible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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