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Most people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced per sonal life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Certainly,
money
 has become a basic necessity of
life
,
therefore
, the majority of people think that people should give more preference to salary rather than a job.
However
, other people believe that the importance of satisfying jobs is more in a happy
life
. In my view, the profession is more important than
money
. On the one side,
money
 is a very crucial factor for surviving.
In other words
, it cannot be denied that finance is the primary source to cater their rudimentary needs as well as enjoying a luxurious
life
,
such
 as better education, modern equipments and enjoying every aspect of
life
. To exemplify, Ambani, India's most affluent person who has hundreds of modern and luxurious vehicles, even a personal jet, and he has gone overseas tours a thousand times because he has a wealth. On the other side, there are those who believe that people should follow their profession, because,
although
 having a good wage could give us physical pleasure, it cannot provide psychological happiness and satisfying
life
. Ambani,
for example
, despite having enormous wealth, he is suffering from various health ailments and personal
life
 disputes, perhaps he does not have time for their family and himself. In my view, even though
money
 is
also
 a significant factor in a job if any, the important factor is putting a pernicious effect on your precious
life
, it should not be prioritized. Because,
money
 can be something, not be everything. Conclusion, the benefits of job satisfaction are greater than the salary in people's personal lives.
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