Maintaining public libraries are waste of money and resources since internet is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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nowadays and can access from all over the world.I strongly agree with

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as extracting or getting information's from

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is spontaneous and more convenient.

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the internet

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nformation related to anything and everything is available in the

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which ease the tasks of users even if its for educational or entertainment purpose.

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enior citizens who find it difficult to read of go through heavy books can take advantage of

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by utilizing the options of big font size for reading newspapers to get daily updates.

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imilar to any other fields the competition among the

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needs to pay less amount for those services which is far cheaper than getting a library membership.

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instance, in India around 85% of the school libraries are replaced with d

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for their academic references as well as spending leisure time by knowing more about the world history. To conclude,

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Maintaining public libraries are waste of money and resources since internet is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduces the ammount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

In modern life, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food and in other products like clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently received an email from your English-speaking friend, Pat, inviting you to stay and asking you to a special party. Read Pat's email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Pat, using all your notes.

• These days, using chemicals in food production and preservation is increasing. Do the disadvantages of using chemicals in food outweigh the advantages? • Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. • Write at least 250 words.