Maintaining public libraries are waste of money and resources since internet is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is irrefutable that w
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the world wide web
is one of the greatest i
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innovations
which has considerably c
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changed
the lifestyle of human beings.Many people b
elieves
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believe
that government should stop spending money for preserving the public libraries as everything is d
igitalized
nowadays and can access from all over the world.I strongly agree with
this
as extracting or getting information's from
internet
is spontaneous and more convenient.
Firstly
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ccessing information from
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the internet
is more convenient than referring through different books to get the same
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nformation related to anything and everything is available in the
internet
which ease the tasks of users even if its for educational or entertainment purpose.
For instance
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f a research scholar w
ant
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wants
to submit a thesis about African culture, he can easily get the details from different authenticated websites like Wikipedia and government websites facilitating
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his details.
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these details
this detail
Also
,
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enior citizens who find it difficult to read of go through heavy books can take advantage of
internet
by utilizing the options of big font size for reading newspapers to get daily updates.
Secondly
,
s
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imilar to any other fields the competition among the
internet
service providers is
also
increasing day by day which is purely beneficial for the consumers. Introduction of advanced signals provides quick and spontaneous search results without any lagging and u
sers
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user
needs to pay less amount for those services which is far cheaper than getting a library membership.
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Or
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For
instance, in India around 85% of the school libraries are replaced with d
igitalized
put into digital form, as for use in a computer
digitalised
library for students to surf
internet
for their academic references as well as spending leisure time by knowing more about the world history. To conclude,
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n my o
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opinion, it
is not advisable to spend money on outdated public libraries
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as multiple sources of information provided by
internet
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are
more reliable a
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spontaneous.
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