Many people today are spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe this is a negative development while others think there are benefits to spending a long time travelling to work or school. Discuss both views and give your opinion
We are living in a busy world.
Nowadays most
of the people spend major part of their day in travels to school or workplaces. Some people argue that spending more Accept comma addition
Nowadays, most
time
in travel
is a good practice while others disagree with it. This
essay will discuss both point
of view as well as Suggestion
points
also
explain why less travel
time
is important.
In the present era a majority of people believe that spending more time
in travelling to work or school is good practice .
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this
thought. Firstly during
the journey we will meet new persons and Accept comma addition
Firstly, during
this
will give a chance to develop new relationships and there by
improve the social behaviour. by that means or because of that
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example if
we are travelling in a bus or train we can meet different Accept comma addition
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culture
people and we can get a chance to learn new culture or languageSuggestion
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second
argument is spending more time
in
help to reduce the mental strength.These people believe that during the Suggestion
to
travel
time
people can completely forget about their family tension and job related tension.
On other hand Spending more time
in travelling has several drawbacks. Firstly it
will adversely affect physical and mental health. People travelling long Accept comma addition
Firstly, it
distance
for work become weak due to lack of sleep and proper diet. A recent survey conducted in India reveals the fact that 50 % of people travelling long distance
had diabetes problem
due to lack of exercise. Suggestion
diabetes problems
a diabetes problem
Secondly students
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Secondly, students
travel
long distance
spend more time
in journey
rather than studies will Suggestion
the journey
a journey
results poor performance
in academics.Suggestion
result in poor performance
result poor performance
In
addition these
people will not get proper Accept comma addition
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time
to spend with their families and it will affects
their family relationships.
In conclusion travelling huge Suggestion
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distance
have higher negative side especially
in physical health compared to its positive side. So it is better to Accept comma addition
side, especially
travel
small distance
for work and studies and stay healthy.Submitted by preethikishre on
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