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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, in
agricultural sector
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the agricultural sector
, they have made a great
advancement but
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advancement, but
 many people around the world still go hungry.
This
 essay will shed some light on the causes and what solutions can be developed to remove
this
 problem.
First
 of all, the government is not paying attention to
agricultural sector
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the agricultural sector
. They ponder that it is not important for them. In spite of having many technologies which can make more harvest, the regime is not using it. May be, they are making
low budget
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a low budget
 on agricultural department. That's why it takes more time to grow rice or any other
food
.
Moreover
, the farmers are not getting enough
price
 for their hard-work. And because of that they are unable to use the technology of agriculture. So, the
price
 of
food
 getting higher. One good illustration is that Bangladesh is a country where poor people go hungry. Because in Bangladesh, the
price
 of
food
 is very high and they don't have sufficient money to buy
food
. To solve
this
 problem, the administration should give more effort for the development of
agricultural sector
Suggestion
the agricultural sector
. They should increase the number of technology which can make good crops in short time. At the same time, the government should give enough money to the farmers so that they can produce more crops.
the
Suggestion
The
price
 of
food
 should be low so that every
people
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person
 can buy
food
 for their living.
Then
 there will be no people who will go hungry for a single day. To sum up, it is essential to give more importance on agriculture because without
food no
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food, no
 individual can live in
this
 world. It will be impossible for mankind to prevent extinction without
food
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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