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At present the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer with relevant example.

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In human life there are four stages of
age
 kids
,
Accept space
,
 teen, young and old. While in
mordern
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
 era some countries have more population of young people than old people, old
age
 people are more than young people. Both
age
group
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groups
has
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have
 own pros and cons which I discuss below. To start with, the
contry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
century
county
 which has more young
age
 group has
significatlly
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significantly
significant
increase
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increased
 in growth. Because young generation
are
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is
 always active, easily adapt new things.
For example
 India has more youth people so Indian economy is growing fast in
last decade
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the last decade
. Young people never sit ideal for doing nothing. Old people
has
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have
 to stay at home because their physic
is not fit
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is not fitting
doesn't fit
does not fit
is not fitted
 as younger people. Old ones
are depend
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have depended
are depending
depend
 on
government
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the government
 in terms of money. Another reason young people are flexible in terms of time and place.
On the other hand
, old ones have more experience than
younge
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younger
young
.
This
 experience
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