Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The increasing availability of usage of social networking sites,

such

as Facebook, Twitter, Weibo and etc.

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a significant feature in modern life nowadays. Some people have worried that

this

development has had a dramatic negative

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

on individuals and society. Generally, I agree with

this

statement. For individuals, the addiction of social networking sites brings many disadvantages to their relationships in the present world and their online safety.

For example

, many young people tend to communicate with their friends and family members online

instead

of chatting face-to-face and the even use the applications, like Facebook during the regular family gathering. These

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

would reduce the ties and bonds between close friends and family members. What’s more, online safety is another thing we should pay more attention to. The growing number of virus threats and well-trained hackers

has caused

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have caused

many

cybercrimes

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cyber crimes

around the world,

such

as identity theft.

For

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our society, these sites

also

have undesirable influence.

This

is mainly because fake news and

rumors

gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth

rumours

are easier to convey online, which would build a distorted world. People are lost in these networking and more likely to make

wrong decision

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the wrong decision

a wrong decision

that

have

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has

profound influence on real life.

For example

, the popularity of fake news on Facebook and Twitter had

harmful impact

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a harmful impact

harmful impacts

on freedom during the 2016 election of America.

However

that is

not to say that social networking sites

brings

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bring

no benefits. One of the obvious advantages is that

this

novel communication way was used in gathering people with the same interests together and chatting with people in remote area.

Nevertheless

, we should be aware of the potential disadvantages and find a way to minimize it when we enjoy the benefits of these sites.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

283 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

social isolation
virtual interactions
mental health
feelings of inadequacy
anxiety
depression
misinformation
destabilize
privacy concerns
data breaches
productivity
foster connections
educational content
social activism

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