New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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It's

true that a cutting edge development in the field of science and technology

put

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puts

collosal effect

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a colossal effect

colossal effect

on the spending of leisure time of

juveniles

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the juveniles

I personally reckon that its

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positive

effect cannot

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hide

its inevitable drawbacks

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To begin

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advantage from the point of view of society is alimenting the proliferation of antisocial activistes To examplify

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when learners devoting their spare time on advance technology which makes them busy

then

there is no

way

to indulge in criminal activies More over they wil we safe and under the proper surveillance of parents while engage in social apps and electronic games

However

this

advantages are not enough to outweigh its noxious demerits and the

first

one which collapse in my mind is bad effect in social bonding

for example

outdoor activtes are the one of the best

way

to spend their percious times with their friends but spending lot of time on computerised games makes them isolated Futhermore huge use of social apps and electronic gadgets put bad impacts on their health to justifying

this

uses social apps around the clock reduce the vision of eyes and

on the other hand

electronic gadgets makes them more aggressive which is harmfull for both society and teens After analysis

this

view it is axiomatic that excess use of everting is bad science provide new technology to change our life in abetter

way

but to use it in a terrible

way

highly pushaway its merits