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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views on how new houses should be built. While some argue that new homes in a locality should be built to match the traditional building style of that area, others insist that
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 owners should be allowed to choose whatever design they like. In my opinion, the occupants of a house should have the freedom to decide how it should look. There are definitely a few benefits
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 following the traditional style. It lends a classic look to the neighbourhood.
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, when all houses look the same, residents feel a sense of equality. People often build palatial homes to show off their wealth. By simply asking them to build a
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 that matches other homes in the locality the government can stop
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 audacious display of wealth. On the flip side, there are many more benefits
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 building a
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 as per the needs and wants of its owner. To start with, homes that look alike lack character. A
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 is a reflection of the owner’s personality. It is a space you own and for
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 reason, the local authorities should allow people to decide how their homes should be built.
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, traditional buildings are not very energy efficient or comfortable. Many of them
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 lack modern features
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 as attached bathrooms or modular kitchens.
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, adding features
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 as CCTV cameras or burglar alarms to a traditionally built
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 can be a challenge. To conclude, while it is easy to follow the historical style of building homes, in my opinion, it is important to allow people to decide how their homes should be built because a
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 is much more than a place to live in. It is an extension of your personality.
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