In many countries, some students live with their families while studying, but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities. Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

In many nations, some university

students

stay with their families,

while

others leave their

home

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to

study

in other cities.

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essay will first discuss

about

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how living separated from the family

while

studying means

students

do not get support from them and

then

talk about how it can make them more

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on their studies and more independent before coming to the conclusion that the benefit of

this

outweigh

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the drawback. The primary disadvantage of living in other cities to attend

colleges

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is

students

receive less attention from other family members.

This

can impact their

study

negatively if they are in difficult situations,

such

as sickness and stress.

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, I lived with my family when I was in university and my mom always made me a bowl of warm soup when I caught

in

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the cold

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so that I would feel better and could attend the classes the next day.

However

, there were many distractions from my brother and sister that made me could not focus on my

study

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as well. Despite the lack of support,

students

who live in faraway places from their

home

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can focus on their studies better and they tend to be more independent in their lives.

This

is because there is nobody else nearby who can create distractions during their time to

study

and take care of them when sick but themselves.

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, my classmates who came from other cities always got good marks and did domestic chores,

such

as washing clothes and ironing, themselves. I believe their academic achievement and independence have helped them

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good jobs. In conclusion,

although

university

students

who live far from home do not have anyone who can watch them, they can concentrate on their studies better and be more independent in doing domestic chores.

Therefore

,

this

essay thinks that the advantage of it

overshadow

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the disadvantage.