In many countries, some students live with their families while studying, but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities. Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

In many nations, some university

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stay with their families,

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others leave their

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to

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in other cities.

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how living separated from the family

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studying means

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do not get support from them and

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talk about how it can make them more

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on their studies and more independent before coming to the conclusion that the benefit of

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the drawback. The primary disadvantage of living in other cities to attend

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is

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receive less attention from other family members.

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can impact their

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negatively if they are in difficult situations,

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as sickness and stress.

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, I lived with my family when I was in university and my mom always made me a bowl of warm soup when I caught

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the cold

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so that I would feel better and could attend the classes the next day.

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, there were many distractions from my brother and sister that made me could not focus on my

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study

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as well. Despite the lack of support,

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who live in faraway places from their

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can focus on their studies better and they tend to be more independent in their lives.

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is because there is nobody else nearby who can create distractions during their time to

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and take care of them when sick but themselves.

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, my classmates who came from other cities always got good marks and did domestic chores,

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as washing clothes and ironing, themselves. I believe their academic achievement and independence have helped them

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good jobs. In conclusion,

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university

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who live far from home do not have anyone who can watch them, they can concentrate on their studies better and be more independent in doing domestic chores.

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essay thinks that the advantage of it

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the disadvantage.