The quality of life in large cities is worsening what could be reasons behind this. What measures can be taken to resolve this problem

It is an incontrovertible fact that today, the quality of

life

in urban areas is declining and people who live in there always complaint about numerous problems which, they are facing.

This

essay examines the possible reasons and suggest some solution to curb

this

problem

. To embark with, there are two main reasons why the living standard of

life

in cities was worse. The

first

and foremost is environmental pollution, which increasing day by day because of people and technology advancement. Today everyone

have

Suggestion

has

their separate vehicle in cities

also

, the construction activities which creating the air pollution. As a consequence, they are suffering with the breathing

problem

like asthma,

chornic

being long-lasting and recurrent or characterized by long suffering

chronic

respiratory or skin allergies. Apart from that, another major concern is population the rural people are moving to the urban cities because of

better

Suggestion

a better life

life

. But, it

lead

Suggestion

leads

problem

Suggestion

problems

a problem

the problem

such

as, accomodation and

life

expenses.

For example

, in Delhi and Mumbai most of people are homeless and they have not enough money to fulfil their needs. There is almost certainly no one solution to

this

problem

However

, one option has to be

to do counselling

Suggestion

counseled

counselled

the public

to aware of environmental

Suggestion

aware of environmental

problems. The authority should offer

the better

Suggestion

the best

better

facilities in rural areas and should

improved

Suggestion

improve

the urban and rural linkage can make

important contribution

Suggestion

an important contribution

important contributions

in improving the situation.

Suggestion

For

instance, if cities and villages are linked well with

effivient

being effective without wasting time or effort or expense

efficient

public transport,

may

a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number

many

people would not shift to big cities. In conclusion, I tend out saying that to solve

this

issue governments and volunteers should go hand in hand only by

this

way they can solve

this

problem

like they are the environmental pollution and population.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

277 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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