Today more people are opting for cosmetic surgeries, hair colouring and other cosmetics. Why is this the case? Do you think this development is positive or negative?

Nowadays, many people are paying a huge amount of money to do plastic surgeries to change their shape to have a good look, particularly,

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them a lot of money.

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