Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is considered by many that seniors' opinion should be followed by

youth

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a youth

the youth

, whereas a school of

thoughts opine

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the thoughts opine

that it has become common that juveniles argue with their grandparents. I personally believe that adolescents should consult old masses and move on their footsteps in certain cases, and intend to

discuas

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

disclose

both viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, teenagers would not go astray, if they prefer to take advice from

old

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older

masses while taking important decisions.

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The reason

being, young individuals due to less exposure of

life

lack maturity, whereas old people can analyse

pros

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the pros

and cons of a particular task instantly.

For instance

, with the help of aged

people

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peoples'

peoples

person's

children after 18 become able to choose

course

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courses

of their interest,

otherwise

majority of them possess

herd mentality

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the herd mentality

a herd mentality

these days, which may lead to have detrimental effects on them. Apart from

this

, in modern time young people have been suffering from lack of patience, and

thus

solely elderly people's teachings can inculcate

such

values in them. It is undeniable that youngsters often try to give up on small

failures but

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failures, but

experienced persons' real

life

examples can make them

enable

(usually followed by 'to') not having the necessary means or skill or know-how

unable

to understand failure is a stepping stone to success.To illustrate, if children come to know that their grandfathers became successful businessman or professionals after frequent trials and downfalls in their

life

, they will get motivated and patient and will not drop their studies when remain unsuccessful.

On the contrary

, teenagers can raise their voice against orthodox thinking of elderly people since some of them still believe that girls should be confined in the four walls of home,

argument

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the argument

against

this

is justifiable as per the conditions of today's era. Nowadays, certain parts of the world have been trying to create an egalitarian society,

wher

In or at or to what place

where

women have equal right to that of men as they are studying in the same colleges as well as doing the same quality jobs that of males.

Consequently

, challenging old persons with stereotype thoughts is justifiable which in turn help young children to face the competitive globe.

Moreover

, sometimes grandparents try to impose strict discipline on their

grandchildren including

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grandchildren, including

stress on wearing traditional clothes not watching movies which

is

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are

a trend in the contemporary world. Eventually, children above 18 would challenge in

order to compete their

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order to compete with their

agemates

an active and efficient cause; capable of producing a certain effect

agents

age mates

. In conclusion,

although

some of the

gray

bright and pleasant; promoting a feeling of cheer

gay

people still want to let their grandchildren follow bygone era customs, I strongly feel that one must move on their

footsteps particularly

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footsteps, particularly

in sensitive situations

,

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,

for they

have enrich

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have enriched

experience

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the experience

of

life

.