Today it is common for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages?

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a network
the network
. Plethora of
mercentile
of or relating to the economic system of mercantilism
mercantile
meeting and training is conducted through
internet
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the internet
nowadays.
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essay will discuss about the unmitigated participation of members and more economic strongly as a merit than
dearth
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a dearth
the dearth
of privacy as demerits, which has less evidence. The main reason to take place online training and meeting is that,
this
increase complete participation of members concern to it. Huge number of members are included in meeting and training. In
this
hustle and bustle life, it is hard to manage time for it and less chance of
involment
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
of total members, which ultimately affect the formation of law, plan and
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
of
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the company
. To eradicate
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reciprocal action and reaction
interplay
a game changer role in traditional practise.
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: five board members of a company
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resident
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places
, can make a group video or voice chit-chat through
internet
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the internet
at
instance
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the instance
. At the same time, online congress is more economic than face to face interaction. One significant criteria is that, all members should be gathered in one place, lodging and
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is
also
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in contrast
all these
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amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
are saved with the help of online.
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computers based training and course are offered by various
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Universities
with certificates. One possible drawback is that, using the web to conduct meeting is
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a dearth
of privacy. Assembly
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through
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the net
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a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
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being
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not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
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to
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a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces
demerit
of it.

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