Today it is common practice for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do the advantage of this new development outweigh the disadvantage?

World
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The world
is shrinking into a dinky family through
network
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a network
the network
. Plethora of mercantile meeting and training is conducted through
internet
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the internet
nowadays.
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essay will discuss about the unmitigated participation of members and more economic strongly as a merit than
dearth
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a dearth
the dearth
of privacy as demerits, which has less evidence. The main reason to take place online training and meeting is that,
this
increase complete participation of members concern to it. Huge number of members
is included
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are included
in meeting and training. In
this
hustle and bustle life, it is hard to manage time for it and less chance of enrolment of total members, which ultimately affect the formation of law, plan and
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
of
company
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the company
. To eradicate
such
problem
inter play
reciprocal action and reaction
interplay
a game changer role in traditional practice.
For instance
: five board members of a company
residence
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resident
in different five
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in five different
places can make a group video or voice chit-chat through
internet
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the internet
at
instance
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the instance
. At the same time, online congress is more economic than face to face interaction. One significant criteria is that, all members should be gathered in one place, lodging and flooding
are
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is
also
essential, which directly rise expenditure of meeting and training,
in contrast
all these expenses are saved with the help of online.
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example different
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computers based training and course is offered by various Universities with certificates. One possible drawback is that, using the web to conduct meeting is
dearth
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a dearth
of privacy. Assembly
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operates
through
net
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the net
is available globally. All the people are not satisfied with our company and with us: ergo they hacked. Ultimately, our goal plan
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
were not
be
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secured almost impossible to take U- turn in business. But it is generally least chance
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to
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happen, such
such
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cons, online meeting and training are
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part of it, less expensive and overall enrolment of members are catbird seat, overweigh privacy as a demerit of it.
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