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Today it is common practice for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do the advantage of this new development outweigh the disadvantage?

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World
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The world
 is shrinking into a dinky family through
network
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a network
the network
. Plethora of mercantile meeting and training is conducted through
internet
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the internet
 nowadays.
This
 essay will discuss about the unmitigated participation of members and more economic strongly as a merit than
dearth
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a dearth
the dearth
 of privacy as demerits, which has less evidence. The main reason to take place online training and meeting is that,
this
 increase complete participation of members concern to it. Huge number of members
is included
Suggestion
are included
 in meeting and training. In
this
 hustle and bustle life, it is hard to manage time for it and less chance of enrolment of total members, which ultimately affect the formation of law, plan and
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
 of
company
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the company
. To eradicate
such
 problem
inter play
reciprocal action and reaction
interplay
 a game changer role in traditional practice.
For instance
: five board members of a company
residence
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resident
in different five
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in five different
 places can make a group video or voice chit-chat through
internet
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the internet
 at
instance
Suggestion
the instance
. At the same time, online congress is more economic than face to face interaction. One significant criteria is that, all members should be gathered in one place, lodging and flooding
are
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is
also
 essential, which directly rise expenditure of meeting and training,
in contrast
 all these expenses are saved with the help of online.
For
example different
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example, different
 computers based training and course is offered by various Universities with certificates. One possible drawback is that, using the web to conduct meeting is
dearth
Suggestion
a dearth
 of privacy. Assembly
operate
Suggestion
operates
 through
net
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the net
 is available globally. All the people are not satisfied with our company and with us: ergo they hacked. Ultimately, our goal plan
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
 were not
be
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being
 secured almost impossible to take U- turn in business. But it is generally least chance
of
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to
happen
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happen, such
such
 incidents have no evidence till now. To recapitulate, most grooming sector of today’s world is web network which
have
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has
 lots of pros
than
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Than
 cons, online meeting and training are
also
 part of it, less expensive and overall enrolment of members are catbird seat, overweigh privacy as a demerit of it.
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