Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that rich nations around the

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should take care of

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affected migrants with basic amenities like food and shelter.

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essay agrees with

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idea because it is

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lacking and reflecting lack of pity or compassion

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to keep affected people of other countries in barbarous conditions of refugee camps or jail while these people have the potential to be the active workforce of wealthy countries. When people are bound to seek assistance to get rid of the

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or riots

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going on in their home countries, developed countries should respond positively.

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world

everything that exists anywhere

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nations are capable of providing shelter or food for the

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affected refugees. If anyone is capable of helping others in their need, humanity should act to provide assistance to those who are helpless. Historically, we have seen a lot of wars and numerous count of refugee migration from the affected countries to rich countries.

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,

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affected people

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Syria are currently seeking protection in Canada and

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with all Canadians are now ready to sponsor families of Syria. Rich countries often have

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a shortage

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in the active workforce. Refugees from around the

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are of different professions, and they are capable of filling the shortage

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employees in different fields. When developed nations integrate immigrants with care into the mainstream resource pool, they will surely be benefited with

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growth.

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, Japan and Russia have negative birth rate and each year they are falling short on active workforce. They can take policy to accept refugees and in turn fill the void in the field force. In conclusion,

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affected immigrants should be welcomed by

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countries because it would be

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lacking and reflecting lack of pity or compassion

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to keep people in

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a vulnerable state

vulnerable states

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immigrants can contribute to the economic growth of hosting country.