Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In modern world, the humanity flourishes on the communication and cooperation among each other. With the invention of new technology each day, it is becoming more evident that we are more dependent upon each other than ever before. Without working as a group, we won't be able to create various foods, medicine to cure almost every

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disease

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; the three pillars of our survival. Let's

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look into the world of medicine. In the ancient times

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various herbs

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

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being used as a cure, but in

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various medications are being made by certified chemists and druggists in a laboratory combining various chemicals. It takes years of study and research to know the perfect combinations which

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suitable for our body. On the department of remedies, we are completely dependent among the collaboration among various scientists druggist and chemist to make these Revolutionary pills.

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, let's  look into the food Industry.  When we learnt to grow food

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a farmer was capable of growing all the food products by his own. But in the

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five decades

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due to the change in the

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and because of various insects

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that started to depend upon various grains

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we begin using pesticides and fertilizers. Now these pesticides are

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being made in research hubs  by various chemists and botanists and biologists. Had there been no coalitions between these three departments

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starvation would have become

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a common occurrence

common occurrences

among us.

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let us divert our attention towards our ability to predict the

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one of the biggest reason of extinction of thousands of species before us. Now predicting

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is one of the most complex and highly sophisticated technological feat we have achieved in

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decade. In the recent years

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where hurricanes and

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a tropical cyclone occurring in the western Pacific or Indian oceans

typhoons

have become a common occurrence

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our existence

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depends

upon the

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firecast

predict in advance

forecast

forecasts

. Now to predict the climate

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we have to launch various satellites which

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were designed

and programmed by various scientists and made by engineers which will supply the data to predict

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. Based on these data

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we

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an algorithm which was combined effort of statisticians, data analysts and

researches

a scientist who devotes himself to doing research

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. Without the work of all these people in their respective fields

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a technological leap wouldn't have been possible. Now

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there is a motion that we have become more and more independent in

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the past couple

of years and well

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there are certain evidences

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that.

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as we can cook foods

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from

our own now

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know the

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beforehand by looking into our smartphone or take medicines sometime without consulting doctors. But

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is a superficial view on our collaboration as all these products are essentially

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a symbol

of us

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works

as a unit. So by presenting all evidences

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we can say co-operation has been integrated with our life like never before. Our medicines

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foods or our survival by predicting the climate is the sign of it. Humanity has always thrived by working with

ohers

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

hers

since the beginning of the evolution and

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will always be a common trend among us.