You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say what the participant liked about the hotel. Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my feedback about
all-day
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meeting, which is done two days ago at your hotel.I set up a Skype call with participants, which are invited
meeting
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two days ago.I was glad to hear that they were satisfied
hotel
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facilities,
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comfortable
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a comfortable
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meeting
room
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.
On the other hand
, I want to express
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dissatisfaction with
food
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that was served for lunch.All members have had
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meal which is served as tasteless. Another problem is cleaning where are glasses and dish on the table. I suggest you install food warmers for all the dishes, and not just for the graves. I
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recommend that you add some western dishes like pasta and toast to your menu. I really hope that you will consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Ridvan

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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