Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as mens, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career& It is said: "A womans place is in the home." What do you think?

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Owing to the fact that women are much competent as men, their work
remain
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remains
underappreciated
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compared to men, regardless of their various sacrifices. In my opinion, I disagree that a
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's potentials
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are
in the home, because of the similar anatomy in relation to a man and
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able
to multitask.
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, the human anatomy of a male and female are the same.
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, there is no difference in the body composition of both parties. The organs and major parts of the body needed for a male to survive are
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present in a female.
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, it is crystal clear that a
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should be given the opportunity to leverage on her skills and potentials because she can practically think, analyse and gather information in the same process that the opposite gender does.
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, in the recent Guinness Book of Records for the world strongest man and
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, the weight of 250kg was lifted by both sex.
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proved that if women are given the same spotlight as men, their performance will be equal. Another point to consider is the higher level of the female gender to multitask and perform more difficult jobs. Female species have the ability to carry out various tasks and duty simultaneously.
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, these attributes are absent in males,
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is due to the fact that they have a
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smaller
capacity to focus on various things at a time.
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juggling activities at home is good, but if they are channelled
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into
the body of knowledge it would serve for a greater good.
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, in Nigeria the National Assembly increased the ratio of women in the upper house and it was proven by the National Bureau of Statistics that the performance of the upper house increased by 30%. In conclusion, some school of thoughts are of the opinion that women are meant to be at home. I believe that the anatomy similarities in both gender and the characteristics of women to juggle
task
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the task
tasks
proves that a
woman
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is meant for more.

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